The children had to compare and create.
Here is Ben's fantastic poem
Remembering Winter
On hot summer days …
My feet remember the icy cold grass
My legs remember the freezing cold water trickling down my gumboots
My body remembers all the layers I wear each day
My arms remember squeezing tightly around my body to keep me
warm
My hands remember clenching my mug of hot chocolate
My face remembers the cold breeze
My mind remembers that winter will be back soon.
Great poem Ben! It will be winter soon, again.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Ben! Well done.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Ben! I'm sure that all your poems were wonderful like yours. Keep up the good work. Soon you will be an author.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Ben
ReplyDeleteben your poem was awesome
ReplyDeleteGreat Work Ben keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGreat ideas and feelings Ben! If you are still wanting to write another poem maybe you could try to base this poem on spring?
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